Monday, June 8, 2009

MEMORIES-falling leaves f yesterday


It's afternoon time, but my day has just began..the scorching heat outside has hardly affected my busy schedule of having rest !! As i move out f the bed to fetch the newspaper my mind starts recollecting the dream i had last night and may be which lasted all along with my sleep... was it beacuse f the dream that i was so reluctant to wake up ?? As i flip through the pages of newspaper various scenes from the dream began to connect like me putting together various pieces of a jig-saw puzzle..OHH is it really me..oh yes i can c myself riding on my bycycle as fast as i can to ... to... to... where am i going?? that's certainly not in the frame..suddenly i m along wit all my friends fighting over a small tiffin, next we all r emtying our pockets just to compensate the tiffin boy..scenes r passing by very fast..the hot debate after lossing the cricket match is still on..my SAD face ,after i lost the 100RS note which i saved over to celebrate my 1st valentine day, now i c myself crying again for not fulfilling my parents expectation in my board exams..the gloomy scenes dont seem 2 end.. i m crying again as i m leaving my school to go 2 a new 1..its my 1st day in the new school..i m tensed n a bit excited..ohhh my God, i c my old friend i lost 6 years ago.. the smiles r back.. scenes r changing..its me recieving the certificate for topping maths examination..my parents r smiling because f me.. i m overjoyed !! its result time again..this time i dont disappoint my parents..i m on 9th cloud .. suddenly the scenes r in fast forward mode.. friends r leaving new ones r coming.. my Love just left, and i was standing there helpless..smiles,gloomy faces,excitement,thrill,tears - all emotions r passing through me in space of a second.. and suddenly m now on my bike driving way too fast for comfort,, but where am i going?? .. Clock just struck 3 and i m out of my thoughts... i solved almost the whole puzzle-put every piece to its place.. but there is still one empty place..the last piece-the last scene... WHERE was i GOING ?? i realize it was not the scenes that were passing by..it was my LIFE that just passed by .. its been a wonderful experience and i need to treasure every special mement.. i need to go in past and collect all those memories and bring all those people together who have seprated for some or the other reason.. was this where i was going ?? YES, certainly.. i was going in my PAST to collect all those MEMORIES as they r the FALLING LEAVES OF YESTERDAY !!!!









7 comments:

  1. well,certainly a master piece by mohit...only thing which hasn't sunk in is mohit crying most of d times...seems weird cause i hav alwayz found dis guy smiling n making others smile..nd yes!!he did remembered his frend whom he met aftr 6 yrs. but seemed to have missed out all of us who has been wid him through his thick n thin.(dat ws my critic part ;))but never d less,a gud attempt!gud going bro!

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  2. yaar.. i never made my tears visible.. thts why had 2 pen down them someday.. yar abt cms.. i have just mentioned my 1st day.. and that day 1st thing i noticed was my old friend.. u hav obviously been there for me eveytime.. and thanks for that !!

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  3. I have no words ! this is outstanding effort

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  4. Just one line ...

    Its a master piece....

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  5. Simply Brilliant. I suggest u start writing Novels. Its awesome man. i lost in it while reading. U have done a gr8 job..
    Banna ne to kamal hi kar diya.
    hats off to u.

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  6. Hey. You have turned out to be a good writer. Very impressive. Keep it up.:-)

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  7. ..... wow mohit !!! i liked it alot... very well written and i can visualize each line .... m glad to be part of ur memories as u hold a very important position in my life now and forever...
    ... good luck bhai...!!
    pragya...

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